I created this blog as a refuge for writers to add any of your unfinished work and get constructive criticism on it. So feel free to add any of your short stories, poems, etc.
Here's my first post. Tell me what you think....
Marissa turned the corner, and rammed into a fire hydrant. She didn't even wince as she paced down the street as fast as she could.She heard the familiar police sirens and felt her heart coming out of her chest. She ducked into an alley, grabbed the first door. locked! She cursed as she grabbed the second door. locked! Marissa was shaking and becoming frantic as she went for the third. It opened Marissa felt relief wash over her for a second as she ran down the dark stairway.
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