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Executive Summary
The Women’s Initiative for Change is a national non-profit organization dedicated to lowering teen pregnancy in America through awareness.  We intend to use social media advertising as well as traditional advertising in order to spread awareness.

Product/Service
Introduction
Teen pregnancy is one of the biggest social and economic problems in the United States.  Teen mothers are more likely to drop out of high school, end up in poverty, and seek public assistance than mothers who wait to have children till they are 20.  Sons of Teen mothers are more than twice as likely to land in jail as average. (National Campaign to prevent teen and unplanned pregnancy)
The Women’s Initiative for change is an Iowa City based nonprofit geared towards lowering teen pregnancy.
Mission Statement
Our mission is to improve the living conditions in the United States by lowering teen pregnancy.
Products and Services:
Lowering Teen Pregnancy by pushing a bill to make contraceptives readily available to women, even if they are under
Current Status
The Women’s Initiative for change is in the planning stage of development.
Milestones to be completed:
·         Feasibility Analysis and Market testing
·         Business Plan completion
·         Applying for Tax Exempt Status
·         Fundraising through Happy Hour and Teen dance nights.
·         Obtaining Government Grants
Funding Sought
We seek $20,000 in grant money and donations.
Legal Status and Ownership
We are a non-profit organization started by Modesta Matos-Acosta.
Management Section
Executive Director
Modesta Matos-Acosta- I will do everything from managing the office, to marketing the organization, to setting up fundraising events.

In a year I will bring in two other staff members
A. Marketing Intern-They will market the organization and advertise our services through the use of the social media such as Facebook, twitter, and the website.  They will also use direct mail, flyers, etc. to market
B. Fundraising Intern- They will plan and implement fundraising events.  They will aid in everything from setting up the event, to advertising it.
I will also employ advisors from time to time
Lawyer
Fundraising Expert
Marketing Expert




Marketing Section

Industry
            The Women’s Initiative for Change is in the Family Planning and abortion clinics industry.  The major players in this industry are Planned Parenthood, which is 58.3% of the industr and IntegraMed America, which is 7% of the industry. The industry revenue should grow 1.5% in the next year.  This industry has a positive outlook because of the Obama Administration; government funding makes up a large part of the industry’s revenue.
 It is also spurred on by an increase in the demand for birth control. (IBISWorld)It is a highly concentrated industry with 85% of the establishments having less than 20 employees. Industry assistance is also high in this industry.  The family planning and abortion clinics industry is in the Growth cycle of the industry life cycle.

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            As it shows in the chart on the right, Federal funding for family planning should increase in the coming years.

Competition
·         Planned Parenthood- The industry giant does everything from providing women with free contraceptives, to making people aware of risks associated with unprotected sex, and abortions.

·         National Campaign to Prevent Teen and Unplanned Pregnancy- national campaign that seeks to educate people about the risks of unplanned pregnancy and unprotected sex.  They do a good job of showing statistics to support all of their claims.


·         Avoidthestork.com- Online campaign that uses awareness to try to lower the pregnancy rate in Iowa.  They are extremely effective in getting their message across and have used television commercials and radio broadcasts to inform people about the risks of unplanned pregnancy.


Target Market
Direct Target Markets
·         Our target market is teens between the ages of 13 and 19.  We are especially targeting teens from at-risk communities.  These will be the direct recipients of
·         Politically we are targeting the President, the House of Representatives, and the Senate of the United States in order to pass  our bill


Teen Pregnancy in the United States
The Problem

·         23 % of Unplanned Pregnancies are to girls under the age of 20.

·         The United States has the highest rate of teen pregnancy of developed nations.

·         Over one-third (35%) of all local U.S. school districts that have policies on sexuality education require that abstinence be taught as the only appropriate option for unmarried people and that contraception either be presented as ineffective in preventing pregnancy or not be covered at all.
·         Among school districts in the South—where birthrates are significantly higher than the national average—that proportion is 55%


Why it’s a Problem

School Facts:
  • Parenthood is the leading reason why teen girls drop out of school
  • Less than half of teen mothers ever graduate from high school and fewer than 2% earn a college degree by age 30.
  • Children of teen mothers do worse in school than those born to older parents—they are 50% more likely to repeat a grade, are less likely to complete high school than the children of older mothers, and have lower performance on standardized tests.
  • About one-fourth of teen moms have a second child within 24 months of the first birth
Relationship:
  • 8 out of 10 fathers don't marry the mother of their child. 
  • Absent fathers pay less than $800 annually for child support,
Child:
  • More than half of all mothers on welfare had their first child as a teenager.
  • Two-thirds of families begun by a young, unmarried mother are poor.
  • Children who live apart from their fathers are 5 times more likely to be poor than children with both parents at home.
  • The daughters of young teen mothers are 3 times more likely to become teen mothers themselves.
  • The sons of teen mothers are twice as likely to end up in prison.
What Can Be Done:
·         Education that not only teaches abstinence, but also teaches students about proper use of contraception.
·         Free and readily available contraception.
How:
·         We are pushing the Prevention First Act, which is a bill that would give family planning programs another 700 million and  make it illegal to deny women access to contraceptives based on discrimination.

Product/Service
Challenges and Risks
·         Procuring funding. 

·         Getting the prevention first act enacted poses major political challenges.  It will be opposed by conservatives and religious groups.


Costs
Item
Rent on office space                                                              9,600
Fundraising Events                                                                 500
Legal Fees                                                                                400
Total:                                                                                      10,500

Services

Change in Legislature:
We wish to aid the Prevention First Act to becoming enacted. This would make contraceptives such as birth control more readily available and


Overall Marketing Strategy
Since the regular American policy to social and economic problems is to wait until they reach disastrous proportions before taking action, our strategy is to convince everyone, that immediate action is necessary.  We must show the President, the Senate, the House of Representatives, and the American people that if we maintain the status quo, many people will never break out of the cycle of poverty and how that affects the overall economy.
 In order to do this we must spread awareness of how large of a problem teen pregnancy is in America, as well as how it specifically affects the rest of America, even if they aren’t a teen parent.  For example, teen pregnancy costs the American’s taxpayers 9.1 billion, according to a 2006 report by Saul Hoffman, Ph.D. and published by the National Campaign to Prevent Teen Pregnancy.

Positioning
We are a national campaign with a specific target; lowering teen pregnancy. There are similar national programs such as the National Campaign to Prevent Teen and Unplanned Pregnancy and avoidthestork.com in Iowa.  However, we are willing to join with these groups in order to serve the purpose of lowering teen pregnancy.

Points of Differentiation
·         We have one major goal: to get the Prevention First Act enacted
·         Taking a preventative role to a very real social and economic problem of teen pregnancy
·         Targeting teens that are in areas that make them most susceptible based on research, which is teens in rural areas in the Southern United States.

Pricing Strategy
Our services from the mentoring to the campaigning for a change in legislature are all free to clients.
Fundraising Strategy
Events
1.      Teen Nightclub on Fridays-
On the second Friday of each month we will throw a dance party for teens that are 13-19 years old.  We will rent out a space downtown in Austin and provide non-alcoholic drinks and pizza and charge 5 dollars at the door.  This way we will raise money as well as give teens alternative activities for entertainment. 
2.      Happy Hour
We are throwing every month on the fourth Tuesday because it tends to be a slower night for bars and they are more likely to rent out their space.  We will charge 10 dollars for entry into the bar that we rent out, which will get the customer two drinks as well.  The price is cheap enough that we’ll attract people in their 20’s and 30’s that frequent bars for a deal on Tuesday, and they can also feel good about their money going to charity. We will advertise these events through Face book and Twitter as well as through the local newspaper and ads placed around Austin.
Advertising Strategy
Internet and social networking:  This will be our biggest median for reaching teens that need our services as well as reaching the President, the Senate, and House of Representatives in order to implement policy changes.  We will have our own website in order to spread our message, but we will also be using many other websites such as:
Change.org
Change.org is a popular website for people who wish to implement social change by banding together and signing petitions that they agree with and sending them to people with political power to change these things like Governors, Senators, and the President.  This will be a useful tool for us to garner support for lowering teen pregnancy by enacting the Prevention First Act, if there is enough support.
Facebook
Facebook is an extremely popular social media tool that we will use to spread our message quickly and reach a large population.  This will be especially useful for spreading the news about our mentoring program.
Twitter
Twitter is another popular social media website that we will use to reach politicians for enacting the Prevention first act, and to reach the American public about our program.
Newspaper:
We will create a public press release that we will deliver to the newspapers in the area such as: The Austin Daily Herald, and the Austin American-Statesman. We will also deliver our press release to nationally renowned newspapers such as The Chicago Sun Times, and The New York Times.

Mail:
We will use this medium in order to spread facts and figures about the detrimental effects teen pregnancy has on the American Economy.  These will be sent out to everyone.





            Jessica Closes the Gap

In the Merchant of Venice things are not what they seem.  The Merchant of Venice is essentially a feminist play. Shakespeare’s message in The Merchant of Venice is that even if someone is at the bottom of the social ladder, because of gender of religion, they can still rise above this adversity. Jessica in The Merchant of Venice is strategically used by Shakespeare as an example of how someone can rise above the social misfortune that they were born into.
Shakespeare’s The Merchant of Venice is an optical illusion in literary form.  It seems to be literary proof that “Things aren’t always what they appear”.  It’s called the Merchant of Venice, yet the actual merchant, Bassanio, is a relatively minor character.  It would seem to be about men, but the female characters are the most important characters.
Jessica, though a minor character, actually plays an important role.  She is strategically used to contrast Shylock and to parallel Portia.  Shylock is a socially disadvantaged outsider in Venice, due to his religion.  Shylock often faces prejudice from many people in the society, even from the legal authority.  He is also cheap, greedy, hateful, and deserves some of the karma that comes his way.  Shylock is almost a stereotypical Jewish character from an anti-Semitic viewpoint.
Shylock’s only saving grace is that he is undeserving of the prejudice that the Venetian society deals him. 
“For sufferance is the bade of all our tribe.
You call me misbeliever, cutthroat dog,
And spit upon my Jewish gabardine,” (1.3.108-110)
In fact, no one deserves the treatment he is given by the Christian Venetians.  This begs the question of whether Shylock is evil or is he simply acting reacting to a society that was set against him to begin with.  Shylock seems to be to be doomed to fail from the beginning.  He only wants what he was promised from the beginning by Antonio and Bassanio.  Antonio agreed that if they do not pay Shylock his bond of 3,000 ducats in the allotted time then, Shylock could cut a pound of Antonio’s flesh.
However, in the end, because of Venetian law, and Portia’s cleverness, Shylock never gets his loan back.  In fact, he is almost sentenced to death.  The Christian court was merciful, and instead of death for “conspiring to kill a Venetian citizen”, Shylock must give all of his property to Lorenzo and Jessica, the daughter who abandoned him, and he must convert to Christianity.
Jessica is Shylock’s daughter, but familial bonds are where there similarities end.  While Shylock is described as old, and ugly, Jessica is the opposite.  According to Lorenzo,
“For she is wise, if I can judge of her,
And fair she is, if mine eyes be true
And true she is, as she hath proved herself;” (II.6.55)
Shylock is described by his Jewishness, more often than his name. “And say there is much kindness in the Jew.” (1.3.152)  He is often referred to as “the Jew”.  However, Jessica is often referred to as “gentle,” which is similar to gentile, a word for a non-Jew.  Jessica is even referred to as Christian, to the point where people mock the idea that Jessica could be Shylock’s daughter. 
“There is more difference between thy flesh and hers than between jet and ivory, more between your bloods than there is between red wine and Rhenish.” (3.1.36-38) 
Salerio compares Jessica and Shylocks kinship to jet and ivory, meaning that they don’t look anything alike.    
            By running away from Shylock, Jessica forsakes her Jewish race and culture for the Christian religion.  Jessica says “I shall be saved by my husband.  He hath made me a Christian.”  This line echoes a line in the bible. “For the unbelieving husband is sanctified through his wife, and the unbelieving wife is sanctified through her believing husband; for otherwise your children are unclean, but now they are holy. “(I Corinthians 7:14)  Jessica could be seen as deserting her father, and being an ungrateful daughter.  This indicated that Jessica actually believes the Christian mores and that she is willing to become Christian because it follows what she actually believes, rather than because it would be more convenient at this time in Venice to be a Christian rather than a Jew.
            However, Jessica does seem to think through her decision carefully, and does seem to feel sad after having chosen Lorenzo and society over her father and culture.  It’s clear that her decision to run away was premeditated. 
“What heinous sin it is in me to be ashamed to be my father’s child!  But though I am a daughter to his blood, I am not to his manners.” (2.3.16-19)
Jessica seems to be more ashamed of her father’s character than his culture and race.  This is shown when Jessica tells everyone at Belmont that her father is more interested in getting revenge on Antonio than collecting his return on investment.  “ I heard him swear  to Tubal and Chus, his countrymen, that he would rather have Antonio’s flesh than twenty times the value of the sum that he did owe him” She tells on her father, because she doesn’t agree with his motives and childish revenge.





Women are the most logical characters, and the most merciful characters.

Jessica is necessary because she is an ideal contrast for Portia.



"The rules of fair play do not apply in love and war." John Lyly


  
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Frontline Poisoned Waters Assignment

Major Problems
Pollution from agriculture and business- An example is the dead zones in waterways. Dead zones are areas in the water that have no oxygen because the chemicals in the water attract an alga that eliminates the oxygen in the water.
Issues:
·         Financial Loss- Billions of dollars of income from fishing and tourism are lost by the areas around polluted waterways such as the Chesapeake Bay Area.

·         Health- Polluted waters harm human being’s health as well as kill animals that come into the areas, especially in the “dead zones.” 
Pollution from Urban Sprawl- Urban sprawl is the pattern of people moving away from urban areas into the surrounding suburban areas. 
Issues:
·         Environmental Cost- People living in suburbs are more dependent on cars than people living in cities.  Also, larger houses and lawns emit more pollution.
·         Other Costs/ Externalities- Greater dependence on cars creates greater dependence on oil for the whole economy.  Also, the social costs of increased driving include lowering the air quality in the area.

Possible Solutions
·         Encouraging organic farms- We could create a 5% fine on soda in the United States.  The money from the fine could go towards organic farming in the U.S.  Replacing large inorganic farms with small, organic farms would cut back on fertilizer runoff into waterways.  This would lower the health and financial impact of the dead zones.

·         Enacting an impact fee for each city based on how far the development is from the city center, like the one in Lancaster, California.  This would help ensure that downtown areas would not become financially desolate areas because of urban sprawl.








          

Elizabeth Bathory: The Countess of Cachtice
“Countess Elizabeth Bathory checked her reflection in the mirror as the young servant girl brushed the shining, jet black hair on which she prided herself.  The tiniest lines were beginning to gather around her eyes and the Countess regarded them with alarm.  The servant girl was annoying her too, with her clumsy brush-strokes.  Scared that her mistress might fly into one of her rages, the girl nervously pulled the brush too hard through the long hair.  The Countess screamed with rage.  Turning on the cowering girl, eyes blazing, she lashed out, her long nails gouging a deep scratch in the maidservant’s hand.  Enough blood was spilt to splash her own hand before she banished the girls from her presence with an angry tirade.
“But a few days later, the Countess noticed that this same patch of skin seemed to be looking particularly radiant.  She felt a delicious thrill of excitement.  Could she have discovered the secret of eternal youth?”[1]This event is said to have inspired her downfall into an extreme murder spree and to have been a catalyst for her most depraved acts.  This story is just one of the many myths about Countess Elizabeth Bathory, who lived in 17th century Hungary. These included hanging beautiful virgins upside down and slitting their throats, or “allowing the blood to drain off into a pool in which she bathed.”[2]She is also accused of being a witch, a werewolf, and a lesbian.
Although none of these stories are likely to be true, the truth is even more shocking.  Not only was able to kill 650 girls and escape detection for many years, but she also escaped a trial and an execution.  How was she able to do this?   Elizabeth Bathory’s immensely powerful political ties, the unstable political background in Hungary in the 17th century, and the legal situation allowed her to be able to murder more than 650 girls, remain undetected for more than 20 years, and still did not receive a trial or an execution.
There is substantial proof that she murdered many young women and got away with it for many years but how or why, is a mystery. Even more baffling than how Elizabeth covered her tracks is what would influence someone to do these gruesome murders with absolute disregard to human life. Elizabeth had extremely negative influences in her childhood that may have led her to believe that violence towards the peasantry was acceptable. 
One such event was when Elizabeth was six years old.  At Ecsed, the Bathory family castle, there were a group of gypsies hired to play music for a party.  One of these gypsies was later accused of selling one of his children to the Turkish enemies; he denied this charge and explained that the Turks had stolen his daughter.  Now being cleared of these charges, the guards had searched him and found bundles of cash in his pockets, which he couldn’t explain.  The gypsy was judged guilty at castle Ecsed and sentenced to death.[3]  It seems as if they had already wanted to accuse the gypsy man of something just because of his ethnicity, and because the Count and Countess’s word will be taken over the gypsy’s about the truth.  They, the Magyars which is the upper-class Hungarian race, could seemingly accuse someone of a lower class and a different race of whatever they felt like for any reason.
The gypsy’s sentence was carried out as follows: Three soldiers split open the abdomen of a horse; they shoved the gypsy inside with his head sticking out of the horse.  Then they sowed the stomach of the dead horse back up.  In Elizabeth’s diary she talks about how after her disgust at the smell of the dying man and horse she actually giggled at the incident[4] Perhaps she had already been taught that peasants were less than human and had witnessed others of her class utilize severe violence towards the lower classes, which in this case was the gypsies. Another instance of Elizabeth’s family being extremely cruel towards the peasantry was with her cousin, Stephen the prince of Transylvania.  When the peasants of Transylvania revolted, Stephen had the ears and noses cut off of 54 of them.[5] Seeing this kind of behavior from one’s own family could definitely influence a child to believe that violence was commonplace.
After being engaged to Ferenc Nadasdy, Elizabeth had another experience that would influence her for the rest of her life.  Elizabeth had moved into her future mother-in law, Ursula’s castle.  There Elizabeth was impregnated by a peasant lover.  Ursula quickly made arrangements for Elizabeth to be taken to a Bathory castle in the countryside to have her baby in secret.  All the while Ursula told everyone that Elizabeth was sick.  After giving birth to her daughter, Elizabeth was forced to give her up to a peasant family, who would raise her.  This event must have caused Elizabeth serious embarrassment, if it didn’t completely derail her.  The simple fact of having been impregnated by some of the peasant class, especially when she came from the most prominent family in Hungary must have been extremely embarrassing.  Then having to give her daughter up for a peasant family to care for could also be linked to her hatred of the peasants .[6]
It would be useful in order to understand Elizabeth’s treatment of peasants and how she escaped detection we must first understand the complete backdrop of Hungary; what kind of an era she lived in and what the laws were.  Before Elizabeth Bathory was born in 1514, the peasants of Hungary were all obligated to join the military and fight against the Turkish forces.  The government tried to disband the military right away, once they realized that they had put all of the serfs together in an army, and given these serfs weapons.  One man, George Dozsa also realized the potential of this army, and led the army of peasants to revolt against the feudal lords.  Dozsa’s peasant army was defeated by soldiers under the feudal lords in July.[7]
 After this peasant revolt, a new law called the Tripartitum was instated as a punishment for the peasants.  It meant that peasants could no longer travel, as they were completely tied to the land they worked.  This new law also meant that serfs were judged to be innocent or guilty of a crime based solely on the lord’s word.[8] A peasant could leave in theory, but in practice they could be accused of any crime by the lord and forced to pay for this “crime” with work.[9]
Not only did the laws of Hungary work in Elizabeth’s favor, but so did the Political atmosphere. The political station of Hungary in the 17th century was extremely shaky. After the Hungarians are defeated by the Turks at the Battle of Mohacs, Hungary is split into three different areas: Southern Hungary, Western Hungary, and Transylvania.  Southern Hungary is under the “allegiance of the Sultan of Constantinople,” which implies that it is occupied by the Turks.  Western Hungary is under a puppet government to the Holy Roman Empire. Northern Hungary or Transylvania remains somewhat independent of the Hapsburgs or the Turks.[10]
Hungary is the closest European nation to the Turkish Empire and constantly under threat from them.  There were many raids from Turkish invaders and war with the Turks never resided while Elizabeth was alive. [11]The brutal war with the Turks also meant that violence and torture were fairly commonplace. It also meant that people live in constant fear of attack and this strengthens the powers of those protecting the city.  This includes the Countess Bathory who would have had direct power and responsibility for the villagers in the nearby towns.          The Countess herself had control over the area surrounding her castle at Cachtice.
With this kind of extreme social power that nobles held and the instability of Hungary at this time, it is less surprising that Elizabeth Bathory was able to commit murder without being caught.  Elizabeth was a member of the Bathory family, which was the wealthiest and most powerful family in Hungary. The Lord Palatine of Hungary, which is “the highest legal authority in Hungary” was her cousin by marriage, George Thurzo.[12] Elizabeth’s most powerful cousin, Stephen Bathory, was king of Poland, and later became Prince of Transylvania. These close familial ties to powerful leaders is what allowed Elizabeth’s murder sprees to go unpunished for so long. 
Although the Holy Roman Emperor, Rudolph II may have heard of Elizabeth’s crimes from the complaints made by the peasants of Cachtice to his officials, he probably wouldn’t have wanted to make an enemy of the ruling Prince of Transylvania.  Arresting Elizabeth certainly would have made relations with her cousin Stephen and therefore, Transylvania, sour.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           
Much of Elizabeth’s torturing is completely influenced by her lovers. Elizabeth’s torture of her peasants didn’t begin until after Elizabeth and Ferenc Nadasdy married.  Ferenc had earned the nickname of “the black night of Hungary” for his viciousness towards the Turks. He was well-known in the military for the skilled torturing techniques he used on captured Turkish soldiers.  Ferenc spent many afternoons teaching his wife, Elizabeth, new techniques he had learned.[13] 
One technique he showed Elizabeth was called “star kicking.”  A maid was forced to undress and honey was rubbed all over her.  Then she was forced to stay outside for a day, while the bugs and the bees stung her.  Often times, the maid would pass out from the pain, which was seen as a mysterious “falling sickness” to Elizabeth and her accomplices.  In order to cure the “falling sickness”, the star kicking technique was employed.  One of Elizabeth’s accomplices would put a piece of fire-lit paper between the toes of the passed out maid.  The girl would “see stars, and kick” [14]
When her husband was away at war, Elizabeth took out her boredom on her servants.  She was especially harsh towards servants that tried to escape.  For example, Pola, a 12-year old servant had escaped from the castle. Dorka, and Helena Jo, two of Elizabeth’s main accomplices, found Pola and brought her back to the castle.  Elizabeth went into one of her extreme rages.  She grabbed Pola and threw her into a cage that was hauled by a pulley, which Elizabeth had had constructed for this purpose.  The cage had spikes on the inside, which Pola tried to avoid, but Ficzko maneuvered the ropes to make the cage move from side to side and “Pola’s flesh was torn to bits.”[15]
After her husband died, Elizabeth found a new lover in Anna Darvulia, who was a well-known sadist and dabbled in the dark arts.  Many of Elizabeth’s other accomplices feared Darvulia because they believed that she was the catalyst for Elizabeth’s killing sprees and because Elizabeth took orders from her.  Anna Darvulia had also taught Elizabeth many new torturing techniques.  One of these is called the cold-water technique.  This is where a maid was told to undress and then forced outdoors in the winter.  Cold water was poured over the maid from above.  Everyone that was subjected to this “technique” died.[16]
After Anna Darvulia died, Elizabeth found a new lover in Ezri Majorova, who was the widow of a tenant farmer.  Although Darvulia had advised Elizabeth to only kill peasant girls, Majorova though it was a good idea to also murder girls of the nobility.[17]  Bringing noble women to her castle was more difficult and she had to entice them by throwing a party and killing them would not go unnoticed.[18]
Elizabeth’s murder of noble girls bred rumors and eventually all of those tortures and mass killings that Elizabeth and her entourage committed became public knowledge.  Although long before Elizabeth’s trial, the peasants of the city of Cachtice had a general idea of what was going on at the castle, they had no power to do anything about it.  They lodged a formal complaint about the cruelty of Ferenc Nadasdy and his wife toward their servants to the Holy Roman Emperor Rudolph’s officials. [19] However, they were ignored because they saw the death of Slovak peasants as a small price to pay politically compared with openly denouncing a member of the Bathory clan.  Besides, Elizabeth’s cousin Stephen was King of Poland and the Holy Roman Emperor wanted peace with Poland, and Elizabeth’s other cousin George Thurzo was Lord Palatine of Hungary.  This is the position directly below the Holy Roman Emperor and it’s possible that Thurzo made sure these complaints never reached the Emperor.
Besides the peasantry, the clergy also denounce Elizabeth openly. The pastor, Janos Ponikenusz, the local priest at Cachtice also had heard of Elizabeth’s crimes from the local peasants. Janos decided to investigate it for himself and finds nine bodies of girls, who were obviously tortured in the land between his church and the castle.  The pastor writes a letter to his superior Elias Lanyi saying “Oh such terrible deeds, oh such unheard of cruelties: To my mind there has not existed a worse killer under the sun.” [20]However, Pastor Ponikenusz’s letter never reaches anyone, because Elizabeth’s accomplices stop him from sending the letter and send him back to the church.  The Pastor and his church are fully dependent on Elizabeth for the money she donates to their church. 
It isn’t until two noblewomen whose daughters had been killed and Imre Megyery file a complaint to the new Holy Roman Emperor, King Matthias’s officials that anything is done about Elizabeth’s crimes. [21] Imre Megyery is Paul Nadasdy’s (Elizabeth’s son) tutor.  Imre isn’t a peasant; he is a member of the lower noble class, in fact he is distantly related to the Bathorys.  After Megyery hears about the murders going on at Cachtice castle, and rallies the Hungarian nobles, the Hungarian Parliament is summoned to hear their testimony against Elizabeth.  Everyone was outraged that along with torturing and killing peasants, Elizabeth had also tortured and killed girls of noble birth.[22]  After this the Lord Palatine, George Thurzo, was forced to take action.
Although it isn’t surprising that Elizabeth was sentenced to life imprisonment, it is surprising that Elizabeth wasn’t put on trial for her crimes.  Instead George Thurzo himself decided to sentence her himself without the Holy Roman Emperor’s knowledge.[23]  He sentences her at dinner with their family in front of other high officials in the family and says “You, Elizabeth, are like a wild animal; you are in the last months of your life.  You do not deserve to breathe the air on earth, nor see the light of the Lord.  You shall disappear from this world and shall never reappear in it again.  The shadows will envelop you and you will find time to repent your bestial life.  I condemn you, Lady of Cachtice, to lifelong imprisonment in your own castle.”[24]
Elizabeth isn’t accused of Witchcraft, although she should have been.  There are many accounts of Elizabeth doing spells and curses.  Elizabeth tells her husband about a new spell that she is excited to try. “ Thorko has taught me a lovely new one, choose a black hen, beat it with a white stick, keep its blood and use it against your enemies in this way; it you touch with the blood your enemies or their clothes, they will not harm you.” [25] In this letter she seems extremely excited to try out this spell and seems to have done a few spells already.
Witchcraft accusations tends to spread to people that the accuser knew like close friends and family.  Elizabeth sought after people who had knowledge in witchcraft and sorcery.  That is why all of Elizabeth Bathory’s accomplices in torture and murder were known for their knowledge of the “dark arts.”  Elizabeth’s closest consort and lover, Erzi Majorosne was well know as the town sorceress and is eventually burned alive for sorcery.[26]  Erzi had also helped Elizabeth to use black magic to bake a cake that was supposed to poison all of her enemies; the Holy Roman Emperor, the Lord Palatine of Hungary, and Imre Megyery.[27] 
There were many witnesses to the fact that Elizabeth Bathory openly practiced magic.  The local pastor, Pastor Ponikenusz, attests that before her trial, Elizabeth lost a good luck charm that she had with an incantation on it and he saw her hurrying over to the forest to have the forest sorceress, Ezri Majorova, make her a new spell.  The pastor later found her charm with the incantation on the ground, it read:
“Help me, O Clouds! O Clouds, stay by me! Don’t let any harm come to Elizabeth Bathory, let her remain healthy and invincible! Send, O send, you powerful Clouds, ninety cats.  I command you, O King of the Cats, I pray you, may you gather together, even if you are in the mountains, waters, or on the roofs, or on the other side of the ocean! May these ninety cats appear to lacerate and destroy the hearts of the king Matthias and of the red Megyery and of the Judge Cziraky, so that they may not harm Elizabeth Bathory! Holy Trinity, protect me!”[28]
This incantation certainly indicates that Elizabeth practiced what people in Early Modern Hungary would have considered witchcraft.  This spell could also be seen as a curse against the King, Megyery, and the judge.  One could explain away how Elizabeth wasn’t accused of witchcraft by presuming that 17th Century wasn’t a society that persecuted people for witchcraft, but that wasn’t the case.  Ezri Majorova was accused of witchcraft and eventually burned at the stake for this, but she was only a tenant farmer’s widow and not as powerful and wealthy as Elizabeth Bathory.
            However, there are other accounts of women like Elizabeth, wealthy and powerful, that were accused of witchcraft.  An example is Anna-Rosina Listhius, who is a cousin to the Lord Palatine of Hungary George Thurzo, and is married to a lord.  Anna had, like Elizabeth, been killing servants for many years.  Anna also shared Elizabeth’s interest in spells and curses and was a known healer.  Anna-Rosina had killed 9 servants in twelve years and was only put on trial because her recent killings had been girls of noble birth.   The greatest difference between Anna-Rosina’s trial and Elizabeth’s are that Anna was accused of witchcraft and tried by a court, while Elizabeth was only accused of murder and sentenced by the Palatine himself, without trial.[29]  Although the mass murder’s Elizabeth is accused of having committed, warrant a trial.
            Elizabeth wasn’t given a trial and consequently wasn’t convicted of witchcraft because it would have been disadvantageous financially for her family. The Lord Palatine, although he wouldn’t benefit directly from inheritance of Elizabeth Bathory’s estates, he might have benefitted indirectly.  The Bathory family actually met together and made a political and financial deal to everyone in the Bathory clan’s benefit. If the Palatine George Thurzo made sure that Elizabeth’s money and property couldn’t be confiscated, then the inheritors would pay Thurzo back at a future date.[30] 
            Although George Thurzo and her family may not have known about Elizabeth’s interest in black magic, they were presumable well versed in the laws of Hungary.  If Elizabeth convicted of Witchcraft, then all of her property would be seized by the state.  Even if Elizabeth was only convicted of murder, however, two thirds of her property would go to the judges and the state.[31]  Both of these scenarios would mean huge financial losses for the Bathory clan.
            Originally, before everyone knew of Elizabeth’s crime, George Thurzo had planned to send her to a convent.  However, before he was able to through with that, Imre Megyery and the Hungarian nobles hear about Elizabeth’s atrocities and King Matthias orders George Thurzo to handle the situation.  The Palatine does handle the situation, in the most beneficial way for himself and the Bathory Clan.
Elizabeth Bathory was essentially saved from trial and possible accusations of witchcraft directly because of George Thurzo’s machinations. George Thurzo raided Cachtice castle with his men during the holidays, when the Hungarian Parliament wasn’t in session.  That way he could handle Elizabeth’s arrest his way without the Hungarian Parliament’s input.[32]  Then, he and the Hungarian Parliament wrote letters to King Matthias to try to convince him that Elizabeth Bathory needed no trial and George Thurzo had already sentenced her.[33]  They tried to say that a trial would take too long and they wouldn’t financially benefit anyway.  Eventually, King Matthias consents, and Elizabeth Bathory is imprisoned without a trial until her death three years later.[34]  Essentially, Elizabeth was saved by her family’s power and the political and legal backdrop of Hungary.
           
           
           





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[1] Bad Girls: The Most Powerful, Shocking, Amazing, Thrilling & Dangerous Women of All Time. New York: Metro Books, 2008. P.72


[2] Irish Times (Dublin), September 18, 2007. http://web.ebscohost.com/ehost/selectdb?vid=1&hid=13&sid=040c6195-f90a-43b7-bcc3-530300c1ed6f%40sessionmgr4 (accessed November 20, 2009).

[3] Dracula Was a Woman: In Search of the Blood Countess of Transylvania.. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1987. P.20
[4] Ibid p.21
[5] Countess Dracula: Life and Times of Elisabeth Bathory, the Blood Countess. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc, 1997.  p.21
[6] Dracula Was a Woman: In Search of the Blood Countess of Transylvania.. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1987.  p.29
[7] Countess Dracula: Life and Times of Elisabeth Bathory, the Blood Countess. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc, 1997 p. 20-21
[8] Ibid p. 21
[9] Ibid p.21
[10] Dracula Was a Woman: In Search of the Blood Countess of Transylvania.. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1987 p.17
[11] Ibid 23-24
[12] Ibid 19-20
[13] Irish Times (Dublin), September 18, 2007. http://web.ebscohost.com/ehost/selectdb?vid=1&hid=13&sid=040c6195-f90a-43b7-bcc3-530300c1ed6f%40sessionmgr4 (accessed November 20, 2009).

[14] Trial Document, found in Dracula Was a Woman: In Search of the Blood Countess of Transylvania.. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1987 p. 207
[15] Ibid p.47
[16] Ibid p.47
[17] Ibid p.48
[18] Ibid p.49
[19] Countess Dracula: Life and Times of Elisabeth Bathory, the Blood Countess. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc, 1997. P. 25
[20]  Dracula Was a Woman: In Search of the Blood Countess of Transylvania.. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1987p.57
[21] Letter from Holy Roman Emperor Matthias to Lord Palatine George Thurzo, found in Countess Dracula: Life and Times of Elisabeth Bathory, the Blood Countess. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc, 1997 p.172
[22] Dracula Was a Woman: In Search of the Blood Countess of Transylvania.. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1987pp.67
[23] Letter from Holy Roman Emperor Matthias to Lord Palatine George Thurzo found in Countess Dracula: Life and Times of Elisabeth Bathory, the Blood Countess. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc, 1997 p.172
[24] Dracula Was a Woman: In Search of the Blood Countess of Transylvania.. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1987p.84
[25] Letter from Countess Elizabeth Bathory to her husband Ferenc Nadasdy found in Countess Dracula: Life and Times of Elisabeth Bathory, the Blood Countess. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc, 1997 p.72
[26] Trial Document found found in Countess Dracula: Life and Times of Elisabeth Bathory, the Blood Countess. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc, 1997  p.56
[27] Trial Document found found in Dracula Was a Woman: In Search of the Blood Countess of Transylvania.. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1987 p. 207

[28] Letter from Pastor Ponikenusz to Elias Lanyi found in Dracula Was a Woman: In Search of the Blood Countess of Transylvania.. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1987 p. 66

[29] Countess Dracula: Life and Times of Elisabeth Bathory, the Blood Countess. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc, 1997  p. 237-239
[30] Dracula Was a Woman: In Search of the Blood Countess of Transylvania.. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1987 p.73
[31] Countess Dracula: Life and Times of Elisabeth Bathory, the Blood Countess. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc, 1997p. 239
[32] Dracula Was a Woman: In Search of the Blood Countess of Transylvania.. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1987 p. 73
[33] Letter from the Hungarian Parliament to the Holy Roman Emperor, Matthias II found in Countess Dracula: Life and Times of Elisabeth Bathory, the Blood Countess. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc, 1997p.174
[34] Letter from the Holy Roman Emperor, Matthias II to the Hungarian Parliament found in Countess Dracula: Life and Times of Elisabeth Bathory, the Blood Countess. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc, 1997p. 176
















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